nans glad rap

uuu-yyy

boooooooooo

this gibberish reads like dilated peoples' "the platform"



~i actually like this album tho...~

rotating saturns is probably the only fun part
its kinda like that guy last month posting really bad vids with ok songs
i like the idea tho, id read more when im bored at work so keep creating
so far overcooked

Thanks for the feedback lol ive been listening to Earl sweatshirt and tried to rap like him haha

d=8

"faces of space" and last line are good
id swap "dropping" for "dripping" and u get a fun wordplay with quite a few meanings
overall weird rhythm, tempo changes pretty random and thats cool but it doesnt look intentional so u end up looking confused
a lot of form with little substance, u look like u spit just for the fuck of it and trying to make it meaningful with a lot of fancy words
presentation better, block of text was putrid
some good epithets but they stop giving points for that in junior high

cant be worse than bioxity so keep going lol

Thanks for being so blunt lol I really appreciate it. I only dabble in it and try to play with it. Nothing more than that

blunt lol im tryharding to be super nice
miles better tho
easier to read and no fancy words overkill
message is still there, beginning absurdly bad, ending better ?_? as if two guys wrote it or u warmed up idk
that enumeration at the end would be appealing to just about anyone cuz it sits, commas have this funny effect where the listener just follows, u can break down a book in one line with a sinusoidal staccato and everyone will be happy no matter what its about, applies to anything from music to conversational manipulation

im all about hamilton what do i even know
that means i have no credibility at all
but im the only audience u have

I figured haha, I had to delete it from existence because its so utter shit ass rofl. but I appreciate your feedback

have my favorite rapster song that isn't a bones song (i like storytelling rapster songs 4 the most part)



have some unrelated oldskool ebm too

Why did you blank out your posts? That wasn't necessary at all. :(

rofl honestly i kept reading them and would cringe i cant rap as much as i would want to become a underground soundcloud rapper

Elbow pads on my sweater but I'm not a professor.

Formulas only for mula

Keep the numbers coming constant, call me Euler.

ayy yo whats up
this is me up in the building
yea
fuck outa here haters
and so im cody, built like a train and got that bald head like big brody
im venomous im like a viper, my shits next level getting hyper, put you in a diaper, put you asleep so you can call me rowdy cody piper, your typical neighborhood asswiper.
Where yo btch at1?!?!?
I tell you where
She all over my candy striper
She was a mystery, she was a fortune untold
She was like a fraternity; washed up and 23 years old
She told me something funny, she told me I was the one she considers
She was a funny one I tell you, that bitch be runnin with scissors

70k and a frozen pizza
Aight aight aight here we go
my teacher is randy, get you some ice and a glass of brandy, angles phases triangles all will come in handy, take it all in and swallow like candy
so i said ayy ill be top tier like you someday, but I didn't knew some days that i'd get used some way, so I practiced day and night hoping to set things right, steal my mother's 600$, making randy's purse a lil tight

wonderin ayy sensei what you do with all of that money...

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"Thank you for your purchase, mr randy morgan" -Papa jons

and so im sportdasword, truth foretold, top tier in theory, god tier in practice

[R4p M3nace]
hey yo yin, please dont try to get in
your rhyming like you had alittle too much gin
dont show your face in here, its a crime
you keep talking about your shitty prime
about how you "rekt" ab and lime
even though you got fucked all the time
everytime i kill you i hear you shriek
everytime you type i see a squeak
but words dont explain the failure of this greek


[Chorus]
yinny yinny yinny cant you see
im standing ontop of you like a tall tree
wait one minute, i gotta pee
please dont end my killing spree

U guys are great rofl

NatureValley wrote:[R4p M3nace]
hey yo yin, please dont try to get in
your rhyming like you had alittle too much gin
dont show your face in here, its a crime
you keep talking about your shitty prime
about how you "rekt" ab and lime
even though you got fucked all the time
everytime i kill you i hear you shriek
everytime you type i see a squeak
but words dont explain the failure of this greek


[Chorus]
yinny yinny yinny cant you see
im standing ontop of you like a tall tree
wait one minute, i gotta pee
please dont end my killing spree

its on like a light bulb muthrfukcer

yins a sinister fucker of mothers. beating me? you and how many others? You and what army awaits? those other fucks yin cremates. Lightweights, weak traits and to their tears yin masturbates. The same cunt yin checkmates, castrates and fatally incapacitates.

ey whos this random son of a whore, make you bend over your ass is so sore, that same ass that i tore, a whole new world to explore. This ass so full of shit you can call it a gladiator guide. Yin aint your typical mofo; i conquer and then I divide. And then I decide, what will I do with the likes of you? My balls are blue. I tell you for who, cuz your girl ain't even true. She ain't even goo0o0o0o0o0o0d. Comparing me to your likes; it's like a video with a ton of dislikes. I'll win whatever challenge or piss on every move that you choose, cuz comparing me to you is like going to starbucks to order some juice. *drops mic*

yinstyyyllee i heard u back to gunzzzzz

[R4p M3nace]

yin's not a sinister fucker of mothers
he's a representative of rainbow colors
getting it on daily with his gay lovers
oh did i blow your cover?
allow me to apologize, but it was no wonder
come join a [glad] room and ill do you a number
I'm disappointed, a 30 kill streak, what a bummer
you keep calling me a peddling runner
too many trash kids, i wish someone would end this suffer
instead I'm eating all you for supper
hold on, your lyrics aren't clear
did you say you masturbate with tears?
I'm confused, someone hand me a beer
how do i deal with this queer
someone needs to tell you that your end is near
ill gat you up and throw you in the pier
so hide, mr blue balls, cuz I'm your biggest fear

Dayum, this guy gots bars.

NatureValley wrote:[R4p M3nace]

yin's not a sinister fucker of mothers
he's a representative of rainbow colors
getting it on daily with his gay lovers
oh did i blow your cover?
allow me to apologize, but it was no wonder
come join a [glad] room and ill do you a number
I'm disappointed, a 30 kill streak, what a bummer
you keep calling me a peddling runner
too many trash kids, i wish someone would end this suffer
instead I'm eating all you for supper
hold on, your lyrics aren't clear
did you say you masturbate with tears?
I'm confused, someone hand me a beer
how do i deal with this queer
someone needs to tell you that your end is near
ill gat you up and throw you in the pier
so hide, mr blue balls, cuz I'm your biggest fear

Fucking love this person

1v1 for carkeys, accounts, chewing gums and everything inclined.
You'll endeavor to find, that in the back of your mind, that you didn't lose everything, until i take your bitch from behind. Looking for my condom just to find my headphones intertwined. So I end up listening to songs while I grind. I also tattoo'd 'yinstyle' on her lower pork rind.

He says I have gay lovers? And to his surprise he uncovers, they were his brothers, but I had my druthers on their baby mothers. So his chick dresses up while he slumbers, while his brothers play with their cucumbers, yin fucks by the numbers, you wouldn't think this guy encumbers

[R4p M3nace]
Yinstyle, i haven't seen you in a long while
i know you miss seeing me stack bodies by the piles
the server I'm on is freestyle, the [glad] aisle
the game aint dead, just the players are in exile
you kind of remind me of a dirty pedophile
picking on kiddies and avoiding me by a mile
my rhymes are a chore so there goes my smile
I'm murdering daily, please don't put me under trial
cuz at 21 years I'm too old to be a juvenile
so don't reply, i gave you a reason
don't taste my meat unless you wanna turn vegan
ill fuck you up in any season, even if its freezing
you'd be left bleeding while your heart rate is easing
i don't care about ping cuz I'm really good at leading
leaving gladiators screaming when I'm just fucking teasing

last one is ok